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How to Write a Hook That Survives the First 3 Seconds
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Everything downstream of the first three seconds is irrelevant if the first three seconds fail. This is the technique, not the pep talk.
What a hook has to do
It has to answer, in under three seconds, why a stranger who was scrolling should stop scrolling. Not why your product is good — that's the ad. Why *this specific moment on screen* is worth another beat.
Hook rate is the measurable version: the share of impressions that make it past three seconds. Cold-traffic floors sit around 25%, with strong creative in the 35–45% band — the numbers and the vertical splits are in the benchmarks post.
Six structures that work
- The specific problem. Not "struggling with dry skin?" but the exact texture of it — the flaking at 4pm under office lighting. Specificity is what makes a stranger think this is about them.
- The wrong-way-round. Open on the outcome or the objection, then explain. "I'm not going to tell you this is cheaper" earns more attention than any benefit statement.
- The visual interrupt. Something happening on screen that doesn't parse instantly. The viewer stays for a half-second to resolve it, which is all you needed.
- The named enemy. A category convention, a competitor's cliché, a thing everyone does wrong. Feeds reward disagreement.
- The in-progress open. Start mid-sentence, mid-action, mid-argument. No introduction, no logo, no windup.
- The stakes-first. What it costs to keep doing it the current way, stated in the first line.
Two that stopped working
The pattern-interrupt shout — the loud "STOP SCROLLING" open — burned out. Viewers pattern-match it to advertising in under a second, which is precisely the outcome it was designed to avoid.
The fake-personal-story open — "so this happened to me last week" — is worse than ineffective if your performer is AI-generated: it's a testimonial from a person who doesn't exist, which is an FTC problem, not a creative one.
Technique-level rules
- No logo in the first three seconds. It's a signal to scroll.
- Front-load the noun. The viewer should know what category they're in before they know what brand.
- Write for sound-off first, then check it works with sound on. Captions are the hook for most impressions.
- Cut the first sentence you wrote. It's almost always a windup to the real opening.
- Say a number. Specific quantities outperform adjectives at a rate that's slightly embarrassing.
How to test them
One angle, three hooks, same body — that's the unit. Changing the hook and the body at once tells you nothing about either. Give each variant enough spend to clear noise, which is more than most brands allow, and read hook rate rather than conversion for the first read.
Every angle we produce ships with three hook variants for exactly this reason. See what's in each package.
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